Tuesday, May 13, 2014

A Killers Mind, A Survivors Heart

"Dont you feel mercy?!"
The man had a condom hung around his neck like a noose. His head was covered with a drape. His limbs were tied together with barbed wire. He was clearly suffering. 
Xander Gordon sat on a chair in front of his suspended victim.
"Mercy?" He tilted his head. He took a dart from his pocket and threw it at the mans exposed stomach. 
"Aaahhhh!!!"
"I dont feel Mercy. At least, not to people who harm and molest children." He smiled almost too genuinely. 
The man swung wildly as he tries to escape, but the condom was stronger than it looked. No, it was not just an ordinary condom. It was something Xander made with titanium filling, specifically for this one night.
Xander Gordon grew up like any abused children; smart, able, but damaged. He loved children, and he could not supress this lust to see a father who laid his hands on children that did nothing wrong take his last breath and die. He didnt want to simply murder them. That would simply be too kind. He had a process. Capture them, and then torture them with prejudice. Just as they did to their children. He then tossed any evidence into vats of acid he had produced from chemicals. But most of all, he tossed the corpses away somewhere the media can find and watch the children outside the window as they gleefully enjoy their lives.
"You're still here?" Xanders twin, Owen Gordon, suffered much more from his father. He was damaged to the point that he nearly lost all sense of right and wrong. He spots the man there and is left a little open mouthed.
"Is someone there?! Save me from this asshole!" Owen drew put a pistol and shot the man in his right leg.
"Please refrain from insulting my brother. He may be psycotic, but we still have the same face. anyways, I'd appreciate it if you finish things up. Dinners getting cold." Xander smiled and stood up. Owen returned upstairs. Xander grabs a syringe.
"This a syringe full of hydroflouric acid combined with a special dose of some of my secret carbon to make it travel througout your body and melt you from the inside. Xander beams a smile. "Im sire Julie will certainly not miss you tying her down and... Well you know thr term." Xander carelessly jams it on the mans neck. A few seconds pass, and he starts to convulse to the floor. Smoke rises from many openings and his skin starts to grow red. He finally stops as the liquid vaporises his insides. 
~~~
"Look. The abusive father murderer strikes again." Brooke Willow hands Xander the paper. The man, Lan Dimitri was found dead melted inside, it said.
"Do you think he's related to the recent Thanos Venge cases?" Xander gives a small laugh. Brooke works at the police department. He's ironically Xander's best friend. Brooke was abused as well at a young age, but her abusive father mysteriously died the same time Xander and Owens died. Xander had no intention of letting her know it was Him. One, it was dumb. Two, he didn't know if she'd arrest him or thank him. It was obvious Xander was the reason they lived an easier childhood. 
"No." Xander replied and handed back the case paper. "Thanos Venge is considered a vigilante hero. I dont think he even has a case of murder. Yet. All he does is prove someone guilty for someone and retaliates their crime threefold. Or leave them humiliated and in pain. The murderer... Seems intent on keeping himself a secret." He goves a mental dark giggle to himself as Brooke laughs.
"Well, I've got to go to school. Kids dont teach themselves these days. Ciao!" And with that, he leaves.
He's ready to observe the his precious students and kill their dirtbag fathers.
-Challenge complete.  dared myself to make and finish a complete story in my phone! :D
~Thanos Venge

Wednesday, May 7, 2014

Thanos Venge: A Woman Scorned, A Thanos Retaliating

"Ain't it fun? Living in the real world!"
-
Aint it Fun(Paramore)

I feel like I already know you!
Meet me at  7 P.M. tomorrow at that alley just behind L.A. Live!
I may just get us inside! I'm dying to meet you, Art.
See you there
XOXO Veronica


The message was practically an invite to have sex.
Well at least, to Art Gallner.
You'd think, after nearly losing to a case of three counts of rape, he'd get his priorities in check. But such as life, the scum never change. And so, he got on an easy to rip coat and on a cab to L.A. Live, Los Angeles.
The thing about this place, it was loud and it was very, very busy. If this girl, Veronica, had so much as a working neuron on her brain, maybe she'd have the sense to have a date somewhere public. But where was the fun in that? She probably thought. But Art didn't care for the details. He cared about the condoms on his back pocket and his slowly bloating ego.

"Veronica... I'm here! Come out, come out! Art is here to play." He was holding on to a stun gun on his left coat pocket. The way he got his victims to submit was by knocking them out with the small box of electricity in his hand.
When he reached the alley, all that was there was a small cupcake that read
"Congratulations to the World's Biggest Cockroach!"
Art fell to the barely audible sound of a Stun Gun cackling.
The next thing he opened his eyes to was the same cupcake. As he tried to grasp the situation, he had found himself tied to the alley fences. As he tried to wriggle out, a feeling of shock registered to his hands. The same Stun Gun he used was jammed to his right hand and the rope was also tied to the activate button. So should he wriggle some more, the more his Stun Gun would deal him more pain. Oh the cruel Irony.
"The way I see it." A figure approached. His face hidden by a hat, adorned by a green hoodie. His face was barely visible in the dark. He was holding on to a Stun Gun himself.
"Veronica Mars loved using Stun Guns. Don't you watch television? You should be careful when you deal with someone named Veronica." He cackles his own stun gun at him.
"Who are you?!" Art shouted. The man merely gave him a dark giggle.
"Does it really matter who I am? I guess I'm Veronica in a way. But that's just gay." He jams the stun gun on Art's gut and zaps him. Art screams at the top of his lungs, but the large amount of noise in the area is blocking him out.
"Thanos Venge. The pleasure is all mine. Really. I'm enjoying this."
"Don't you know this is against the law?!" Thanos laughed more.
"So's rape. But really, what's the police gonna do about it? You may as well call this a trip to fiction. The law doesn't care about what's right anymore. So I'm doing law a favor. Honestly? Revenge is sweet. Almost as sweet as cupcakes." He reads aloud the words in the cupcake and smiles.
"Biggest Cockroach. Sue me for infringement cause I've been quoting Veronica Mars all day." He puts an envelope by Art's stun gun. It was very thick.
"Your biggest mistake was raping people while recording yourself with a webcam. My client's been very helpful." Art snarls at him and attempts to spit in his face. His foot was very much broken after that.
"Cara paid for this personal message for you." Thanos pulls out a small card. "Fuck You."
"I don't know any Cara!" Thanos stands up.
"That's not her real name of course. Client courtesy. I'm not about to give you her real name because you're not the type of guy who deserve's revenge. You're the type who people get revenge at."
He steps on Art's manhood, zapped him unconscious and leaves the alley while calling the police with a disposable cellphone.
He calls his client with the same phone. ""Cara", Art's got his just desserts."
"Thank you so much Thanos Venge. You rock." Thanos smiles.
"Revenge is sweet. So's cash."

"Shocking evidence surfaces with rapist, Art Gallner. He was found tied to a fence with the missing Stun Gun he had been using on his past victims. An envelope with pictures and a letter telling everything that he had done was included. So's a very disgusting video inside a usb found with it.
The evidence is so damning, it takes to question who is this mystery person that got it all? People are asking who is this Thanos Venge, as stated in the letter, and is he a hero or a threat. This is not the first time his name has popped up in the news. More on this at 9:00 with Maria Samson. This is BBC News."
Reese Morrison silently ate his dinner with his best friend, Mandy Roe in their humble apartment.
"Can you believe it? Who is this Thanos Venge anyway?" Reese looked tired and just nodded.
"Where have you been anyways? You came home late yesterday."
"Los Angeles." He said sarcastically. Mandy rolled her eyes as Reese smiled.
She'd never have known that Thanos Venge was just sitting across her.

-This is my first Thanos Venge story! It probably gets longer along the way. I Hope you enjoyed!
~The REAL Thanos Venge.